Blog commenting

In Room Nine all of us had to pick a comment and fix it up so that it makes sense, or put the right punctuation in the right place, to make the comment better. Room Nine has done this with James our digital teacher, I picked this comment (at the top of my work) because no one could understand it and it was so confusing to read. I had to make a different version of the comment because the first we had to find a comment that didn't have punctuation and make it sound interesting.

Padlet Creation

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This is a padlet that my class and I have made. I think that it will improve people's comments. The padlet is about what makes a good  blog comment.My list  is under the name Zoe. I learnt that you should make a connection about your work and other people's work, to show that comments make sense, and then we can start conversations.