In Room Nine all of us had to pick a comment and fix it up so that it makes sense, or put the right punctuation in the right place, to make the comment better. Room Nine has done this with James our digital teacher, I picked this comment (at the top of my work) because no one could understand it and it was so confusing to read. I had to make a different version of the comment because the first we had to find a comment that didn't have punctuation and make it sound interesting.
My name is Jodie and I am a student in room 19 at Owairaka school.I really liked how you put in full stops and capital letters.It made me think of when I had mistakes in my learning that I had to restart.Have you thought about putting more information about the comment you are doing.If you would like to see my learning.http://odsjodieb.blogspot.co.nz/
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